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Process Essay
The diagram is about pollution. First the manufacturing process produces pollution from factories in the form of sulphur and nitrogen. These pollutants form clouds, which are blown by the prevailing wind away from the factories towards other areas. The rain that falls from these clouds contaminates the sulphur and nitrogen and is known as acid rain. When the rain falls on the vegetation below the pollutants in the acid rain poison the trees and plants, which then die. Thus the pollution created by factories in one area can damage and even destroy the environment in an area many miles away. We must do all we can to stop pollution because it is bad for the environment.
